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Ally's Complete Updated Bio (OUTDATED)

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Verse:  Creepypasta/ Slenderverse. Ally can be viewed as either.

Name:  Ally
Alias: Slender Doll, Ally-Doll, Nightmare Puppet, Victorian Ghost Child, Nightmare Bringer, Wind-Up Child, Operator's Doll, Operator's Puppet
Species:  Half-human/ Half-Slender
Gender:  Female
Sexual Preference:  Pansexual
Age:  118 (looks 18)
Birthdate: 12/6/1895
Astrological Sign: Sagittarius
Birthplace: East Berlin, Germany
Blood Type: AB+
Alignment: Unknown
Affiliation: Slenderman/ Slender's Proxies
Occupation:  Unknown
Figure:  Petite; Slim (Normal), Widowy; Slender (Nightmare)
Height: 5' 4' (Normal)/ 6' 1' (Nightmare)
Weight:  120 Lbs
Skin tone: Light Grey (Normal)/ Dark Grey (Nightmare)
Hair: White; Wavy
Eyes: Baby blue/ Bright blue
Left/ Right handed
Place/Type of Residence: Black Woods Asylum, Germany
Languages Spoken: German (Native Language), English (Intermediate)
Favorite color: Blue!
Fears: Electricity, Fire, Scientists in General, Nightmares
Good or Bad?: She usually is good but in her Nightmare form she is a neutral character- she can be evil or good
Distinguishing Features: Stitches from the corners of her mouth to her chin, stitches all over her body, brass key in her lower back.
Personality:  sweet, curious, caring, overprotective at times, clingy, moody, sensitive, sarcastic, emotional, childish, a little crazy, bubbly
Dress:  Black, Red and White Victorian-estc. Dress with a hint of Gothic Lolita. Includes Headband and Black Victorian boots.
- The dress also ages when Ally goes into Nightmare Ally so its ripped and tattered and the buttons turn into little skulls.
Official Theme Song: "My Child" By Disturbed
Special items: 
  • Her signature black Voodoo Doll
  • Carries needle and threads to stitch anything up back together.
  • Her key is always in her back but there is a spare if its destroyed or torn out.
Weapons: Poison tipped Pins, Voodoo Doll replicas, Surgical Knives, Claws (Nightmare), Chef/Butcher Knives (Nightmare), Her tendrils
Proficiencies:
  • She is very agile for her state, and can contort her body when in Nightmare form due to her flexible spine
  • Inhuman strength in her tendrils and her body- shows most when she is pissed
  • She uses her wit sometimes when she is in trouble- thinking ahead to block an opponents attack or find an escape route to flee despite her childish demeanor.
Magic/Special Abilities:
  • Teleportation
  • Psychic attacks
  • Black Tendrils from Back
  • Nightmare Form
  • Voodooish Control (Nightmare)
  • Blood Control (Nightmare)
  • Fear induced Attacks (Nightmare)
  • Shadow Control (Nightmare)
  • Berserk Form (Only when in Nightmare)

How She kills/wounds in Combat:

  • Impalement
  • Fear Induced Death such as heart attacks (Nightmare)
  • Killing by Blade Wounds
  • Claw Mutilation (Nightmare)
  • Voodoo Related Deaths- By killing via doll replica
Strengths:
  • Immune to poison and psychic
  • Has a knack of picking up intruders within her area
  • Very agile
  • Resourceful when cornered
Weaknesses:
  • Electricity (Temporarily paralyzes her from the key stopping and can't move)
  • Sharp Objects (She has human organs and can be stabbed and slashed)
  • Fire (Skin can't heal itself)
  • Emotional Stress (Causes her Nightmare Form)
  • Her Key (weakest spot in combat and most vital part!)
Backstory:
  • Childhood: -Born on November 8th, 1885 in East Berlin, raised by the youngest of the older brothers Johnathan. She was born with Undifferentiated Schizophrenia, and was shunned by her mother, two eldest brothers and abused by her father.
  • Adolescence: At age 5, was sent to the Black Wood Asylum outside of Berlin and kept there for the remaining five years of her life;  Murder by mutilation from a hatchet- being struck so many times that she was pretty much cut into pieces. Resurrection soon followed. 
  • Adulthood: N/A
Relationships:
  • Parents: Annelie Grünewald (Foster Mother- Deceased), Slenderman (Father Figure/ Foster Father)
  • Siblings: None
  • Children: None
  • Relatives: None as far as she knows
  • Partner: Weeping Forest (Girlfriend)
  • Familiar: None
  • Mentors: Slenderman; Various Proxies
  • Friends: Ravon, High Voltage, Stitches, Dream, Elmer, Psyche, Dolly, Amnesia, TCH, Grace, Amnesia.EXE, Weeping Forest, Suicide Sadie, Lolly Dolly, Sally, Lazari
  • Allies: MOD, Mary Annette, Insomnia, She-Demon, GeekSheek, Rouge, Xena, Tears, Graveyard, The Hangman, The Broken Hearted Doll, Lulu
  • Rivals: Grinner (She's very uneasy around him), Fidget Bridget, Voodoo Doll, Scarecrow, Crossroads, JTK
  • Enemies: Zalgo, Katazumi, Mr. Stripes, Soothsayer, Plurality #2287, The General, Bella Luna, Bloody Mary, The Gambler, Toy Maker, The Hive

Quirks:

  • Tends to shy away from strangers that she detects is slightly dangerous or a threat.
  • Tends to cling onto the ones she gets emotionally attached too and will get jealous if another person comes in the life of the one she clings onto (like a girlfriend/boyfriend to the person that Ally's attached to)
  • She gets overwhelmed if there is too much emotion or stress and might go nightmare without meaning too, and hides from her fears.

Pets: None
Interests:
Doll Making, Sewing, Drawing, Playing Hide and Seek, Cooking
Quotes:

  • "Its Laughing Gas!"
  • "Beware..the shadows will consume you."
  • "Wanna play a game?"
  • "Am I an abomination..or a real person?"

Additional Notes:
Normal Notes:

  • Schizophrenic (Undifferentiated category)
  • Due to her mental illness, she claims to hear voices, can act with violence, argumentativeness and see things that aren't there (Hallucinations). It also causes her to have a childish mentality despite her age.
  • Due to dying at the age of 10, she is stuck with the mentality of a ten year old despite her appearance.
  • Her brass key is the only way she moves around and survives. Its connected to gears within her spinal cord that are connected to blood veins, nerves and other connections to keep her organs and other body functions working.
  • She only has copies of some of Slenderman's powers, due to the complication during her resurrection after being sewn up. These powers though are too much for a human soul so it has caused two sides of her mind due to aggravation of her schizophrenia - Normal Form (which is her human side) and Nightmare Form (Her monster/Slender being side)
  • Carries a comfort toy of a black voodoo doll that she hates to part with- take it away and she will throw a fit! xD
  • Keeps her surgical knives hidden in her boots and her pins and needles inside hidden pockets in her over skirt of her dress.
  • Carries around black thread and a sewing needle just in case her seams in her skin come loose from age or damage.
  • Her whites of her eyes will go black when she experiencing a very strong emotion and she can't handle it. Its regarded as a warning sign to calm her down before she goes Nightmare.
  • She has memory "blanks" every time she recovers from her Nightmare form. She will not remember anything that has happen during that time. She call these blanks "Black outs"
  • Her Nightmare Mode is a last resort attack- if Ally gets too worked up in anger or sadness (or any other strong negative emotion), gets extremely afraid or is wounded enough that she can't fight back, it trigger's her Nightmare Form transformation.

Nightmare Form Notes:

  1. Nightmare Ally's personality facts:

It can break down into three main traits-

  • Childish but in a more twisted sense- this is the personality trait that shows when Ally normally goes Nightmare. It resembles an psychotic adolescent. It involves her glee and pleasure to harm and kill everything that she could get her hands on- including the one who pissed her off. Tends to sing creepy rhymes..
  • Mature but very sarcastic and sharped tongue- This is a rare one, sometimes portrayed as her version of Slender's "inherited" intelligence- spits insults and can actually function like a normal 17 year old girl unlike her Normal counterpart. Although most times she only uses this trait if she wants to lure victims to follow or play mind games with them.
  • Unquestionable Rage and Insanity (Nicknamed her "Total Sanity Loss" or "Berserk" mode)- In this trait, she completely loses her mind, not remembering who or what she is but only doing one thing: attacking anyone and anything who dare cross her path and keep on brutally attacking them until they're dead or in pieces. This is where she completely consumes her human side and her Slenderbeing side takes complete control. This will eventually kill her since one side can't live alone without the other, due to the fact of her split/ hybrid soul. Berserk Mode is very very rare- only triggered in dire situations or when Ally loses her sanity completely

    2. Nightmare Ally Combat Notes:

  • When Ally's key is pulled out, it causes the gears embedded on her spine to stop turning, making her fully paralyzed and unable to move. Also can cause slow death by simply lack of oxygen circulation from the blood through the heart. A side effect of this method is each time you pull it out in her Nightmare Form, it gets harder and harder to pull out each time afterwards.
  • Be persistent in combat- wearing her down into exhaustion or simply taking her down so she can't fight back is a good way to revert her to her Normal Form.
  • She is not indestructible- it may seem that way but in reality she is more pain tolerant and can take more damage and more hits than her normal self.
  • She is clever and uses telepathy to her advantage if she needs to have a upper hand on things such as knowing who attempting to bring her down with her key weakness
  • Mainly uses her tendrils for impaling attacks, claws for slashing and cutting and chef knives for stabbing, cutting or maiming.

Misc. Notes:

  • Annelie Grünewald dies in service during WW1 saving Johnathan who was Annelie’s older brother who tried to protect Adeline in their time together. Johnathan dies several years later in action.
  • Ann also was the one who made Ally her prized black and red voodoo doll that the living doll carries around. It was a gift on Ally’s “birthday” before Ann left for war.
  • Ally regards Annelie Grünewald as Mommy because of waking up to her and Slenderman after her ressurection. The same reason applies to Slenderman plus the realization of the “similar” powers between the myth and the doll. (Its like a baby duck sees you and think you're Mommy <w> )
  • Ally’s extremely sensitive to the topic of “Mommy”, still believing her mom will come back home. 

Trivia: Did you know? Ally was inspired by the song "Disturbia" by Rihanna while Nightmare Ally was inspired by the song "Monster" by Skillet.

A complete bio on my little Slender Doll. Everything here from the reference and new added things is in here!

Official Reference: DIGITIAL CREEPYPASTA OC REFERENCE: Ally by InvaderIka

Honorable Mentions:
Ravon, High Voltage, Soothsayer, Psyche (c) me
Grinner (c) :iconvonderdevil:
Weeping Forest, Suicide Sadie (c) :iconpncke:
Amnesia, Insomnia (c) :iconmediatoriridescent:
Amnesia.EXE (c) :iconghostfacenikol:
Bella Luna (c) :iconagentmaryland93:
The General (c) :iconhalf-rose:
Katazumi (c) :iconkatazumi-oni:
Mr. Stripes (c) :iconcreepyjc:
MOD (c) :icondrakkigirl:
Dream, Elmer, Bloody Mary (c) :iconzacthemangamaniac:
Plurality #2287 (c) :iconshacklesoul:
Voodoo Doll (c) :iconlovelymeows:
Fidget Bridget, GeekSheek, Stitches (c) :icontheladyissu:
Lolly Dolly (c) :iconxkillershavenx:
TCH, Grace (c) :iconblazexdx:
Tears (c) :icondemonfoxmaster:
Dolly (c) :iconsuriminam:
Rouge (c) :iconlazycatlady:
Xena (c) :iconhellishgayliath:
She-Demon (c) :iconmiuu-chan:
Mary Annette (c) :iconthe-raccoon-goddess:
Scarecrow (c) :iconxephiliomia:
Zalgo (c) Creepypasta
Slenderman (c) :iconvictor-surge:
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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
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:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
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Ok so
This is my first critique and I'll will try to contain my emotion and make this constructive
I'll start with saying that this is a very over powered oc, it generally gets kind of boring if an oc has all the powers/weapons. Maybe try focusing on one or two main powers or weapons so she can be a bit more unpredictable and less confusing. Also, I understand that she is a doll, but her appearance should still be a bit frightening rather than pretty, try adding glassy doll eyes or some splashes of blood on her body.
Another thing is that her clothing doesn't resemble that of a proxy. I'm not saying that she should wear a hoodie, but at least make her clothing more practical, and all proxies need a mask to conceal their features lest they are discovered. She actually fits better as a creepypasta monster rather than a proxy because her story makes sense as an individual monster. I'm actually interested in her story and I appreciate the time and effort you put into her, but it's sad to see such a good oc become clouded by an abundance of confusing powers and weaponry, because then it makes the reader wonder about her identity if you say she is a doll but then you say she kills with poison and surgical tools. Maybe instead she could use her doll appearance to her advantage and appear as a doll to her victim in various places slowly driving them insane to the point of suicide.

I hope my critique and ideas were helpful to you.